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#27 Feb 21 2010 at 7:13 AM Rating: Excellent
Kirby, Averter of the Apocalypse wrote:
Nick crawled up to his Barrett M99, placing his eye on the sight, and honed in on his target. As soon as he heard the designated phrase, he'd pull the trigger. Orders couldn't get simpler than this.

Kyon watched through binoculars as the target exited the newly-arrived vehicle, waiting for just the right moment. He calmly inhaled, thought over the mission parameters, and calmly exhaled.

"Poke it."
This made me think of a gun that fires hands/fingers. I enjoyed it either way, I like your stile of writing. You capture moments nicely with short phrasing.
#28 Feb 21 2010 at 9:45 AM Rating: Excellent
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Liek whoa, first post in this sticky in ~3 months.
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#29 Feb 21 2010 at 5:41 PM Rating: Excellent
You've been slacking.
#30 Feb 21 2010 at 6:54 PM Rating: Excellent
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I know Smiley: frown

Maybe I'll write something next week.
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#31 Feb 21 2010 at 7:11 PM Rating: Excellent
Can it be starring me? Or at least set in Ireland?
#32 Feb 21 2010 at 7:19 PM Rating: Excellent
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You'll play a part, somehow.
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