WARNING: Rape Cyborz text. NSFWFollow

Needs more amputee quadruple penetration.

Needs more paragraphs. Also, Nixnot's ****** is totally overrated.

If someone can't be bothered to put in paragraph breaks, I wouldn't bother reading far enough in to rate it down, get offended or form an opinion on it at all. I'd chalk it up to a half-assed, lazy assault upon my eyeballs and move on.

**** ari that's just sad. You need a sequel with a kind and gentle tentacle monster or something that shows the protagonise that sex can be enjoyable..

Sentence structure was a little difficult to follow though.

It's one sentence long. That is one of its three intended literary tricks.


It was written as part of the debate in the OOT about whether the OOT and Asylum ought to be merged, and/or one or both more heavily moderated. Unfortunately, unbeknownst to me, by the time I wrote it Kaolian had gone on holiday, and it didn't end up in the Asylum where it was intended to land.

Many people, including myself, wanted the two forums to stay separated, the Asylum to stay unmoderated, and the OOT to have it's rules enforced not by locks and nukes but by thread moves to the Asylum. The point of thread moves instead of locks and nukes was to get content movement happening more frequently in the Asylum, by the influx of threads and posters that wouldn't ordinarily happen there by themselves. The other point of thread moves instead of locks would be to keep content movement happening in the OOT, because a move is generally a lot less dampening to overall morale than a lock.

Now that the forum rules are up for review, the post is pertinent in a different way, and I'm not going to write out another schlock piece cold-bloodedly when I've got this one handy. It already contains rape and child abuse. Although admittedly not attacks on real children. Hmmm, pretend I changed Mindel over to Niobia.

Many OOT posters were protesting about the *OOT* being more heavily moderated. They wanted to keep it the way it has been on average lately, which is far slipped from it's original rules. They want to keep the boundaries pushed out there.

But I agree there has to be a newbie safe zone for out of topic posters, and the OOT is it. Therefore, although I regret it, I think the OOT does need to be more heavily modded so that newbies can post without being attacked before they settle in.

The Asylum exists presently in theory as the playground of the posters who can "take it". There are lots of posters who want a place to read and write cruel or shocking jokes, because that entertains. Or just find entertainment in plain cruel or shocking trolls/content.

So what do we want the Asylum rules to be?

And how do we move over posters from the OOT who are "Asylum ready" but OOT habituated, and not Asylum habituated?


Edited, May 14th 2009 3:07am by Aripyanfar

Someone who has been sexually abused, perhaps especially in childhood, might be made extremely ill/disturbed/traumatised to read something like my OP.

I'm exaggerating. She did attack me while I was sleeping, but she got nowhere near my ********** I watch out for my boys.

Well, yeah, but if you're disgusted by violent sex then you're going to be disgusted by violent ****.

What I mean to say is that everyone on the forums who read that knew that you weren't being serious. Unless you were being serious. In which case, bai!

/flee



God, no. She's half my weight. I just lifted her off the ground.

Edited, May 14th 2009 6:46am by zepoodle

I think 2 things right now: newcomers should stay away from the asylum, and you need to keep your sick, twisted, demented, and filthy thoughts to yourself.

Thank you for finally getting the facts straight.

Edited, May 14th 2009 9:23am by Mindel

Er... you were joking, right?

To demonstrate a point about whether it would or would not be moved, I think

Ooooh. Ok, I guess that makes... a little sense.