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#1 May 05 2007 at 5:33 PM Rating: Excellent
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This is just a rough draft. And it needs some work. Going for an effect similar to this:

http://www.popartuk.com/g/l/lgst2792.jpg

[img]http://swg.allakhazam.com/kd/asylumshirt.jpg[/img]

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#2 May 05 2007 at 5:35 PM Rating: Decent
 
              A S Y L U M 
 
 
 
In =4, everyone can tell you to GFY. 


Something like that for the text?
#3 May 05 2007 at 5:56 PM Rating: Decent
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Sold, i'll take 2 in medium.
#4 May 05 2007 at 6:35 PM Rating: Good
I like.

Better than that Wizard-image one posted in =3, at least.
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#5 May 05 2007 at 6:36 PM Rating: Good
The logo should be embroidered on the right chest area, and the rest should go on the back. That would make this a good design.
#6 May 05 2007 at 7:04 PM Rating: Decent
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Elderon wrote:
The logo should be embroidered on the right chest area, and the rest should go on the back. That would make this a good design.

Bingo!
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#7 May 05 2007 at 7:24 PM Rating: Good
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what about using someone in a straight jacket instead of some hurricanish pic? Something like this or maybe this? There is also the pic used from Ogame that I loved, which would work perfectly


edited to add another motto thought:
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Edited, May 5th 2007 11:34pm by DSD
#8 May 05 2007 at 7:41 PM Rating: Excellent
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I love it Kao!

Btw, the image we use has to be either the property of Kao or royalty free, otherwise we might get into trouble for using it.
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#9 May 05 2007 at 8:45 PM Rating: Default
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Whoever is doing your design work (both for Tees and for the site) needs to be fired.

Seriously, I know nerds are not the most fashion savvy of folks but really, this is pretty bunk. Less bunk than the one shown on forum=3, but still pretty f'ucking bunk.
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#10 May 05 2007 at 8:53 PM Rating: Excellent
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Yeah, the other one: http://artworks.avalonweb.net/excellence/asylum.jpg would need to get permission for use. This one was based of a historical photograph taken by a city government of their asylum, therefor we can use it.
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#11 May 05 2007 at 8:55 PM Rating: Excellent
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I did this one. I dunno. I think i've seen worse out there. By all means, if you have a better one, step up to the plate and submit one. Or maybe offer some other constructive critisizm besides "f'ucking bunk"
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#12 May 05 2007 at 9:14 PM Rating: Good
I like it except for the placement of the Allakhaazam logo. I imagine where it cuurently is it would draw extra attention to my waist, and then to my crotch-groinal area and-

Oh ****, nevermind, I like it!


Honestly, though, I think it's fine but I would move the logo. Either like the layout Eldy suggested or if this is the front of the shirt move it to the upper-back. It's a bit busy otherwise.
#13 May 06 2007 at 7:34 AM Rating: Good
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eh.
too much IMO.

I'm thinking like the little Allakhazam Asylum logo on the front left breat of the shirt with the huge letters "GFY" or "ESAD" or any other commonly over-used internet euphemisms.
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#14 May 06 2007 at 10:01 AM Rating: Good
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Shouldn't there be a comma after "here"?

#15 May 06 2007 at 10:05 AM Rating: Excellent
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I like it!
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#16 May 06 2007 at 12:16 PM Rating: Excellent
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trickybeck wrote:

Shouldn't there be a comma after "here"?



There isn't one on the aliens poster I modeled it after. Grammatically, it probably should have one. But in this case i'm going to leave it off.
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#17 May 07 2007 at 4:41 AM Rating: Default
Hmm.. i'll ask my brother if he will make a design for you he's actually really good with computer art.
#18 May 07 2007 at 5:06 AM Rating: Decent
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Ahhh so you wish for me to illustrate how it is f'ucking bunk and give alternatives!

First off lose the graphic. It is too large, it is ugly and it draws attention away from everything else on the shirt. As others have REPEATEDLY mentioned in both of the 'T-shirt' threads, keep it f'ucking simple.

Give me a t-shirt with a couple different colours choices, give me the 'Allakhazam' dagger logo at a decent size on the left breast. This will do to start. If you wish to take it from there and start putting more text such as 'forum=4'. 'gfy' etc then do so but please have someone who has designed a t-shirt before do it for you. If you feel the need to add a graphic keep it simple, keep it relevant, make it a symbol or perhaps something identifiable such as WoW tee's having a Horde insignia on the front rather than a picture of a raging orc. One is a cool pattern that those in the know will recognize, the other is a big *** picture announcing ones nerdliness to the world and will ensure enforced celibacy for the wearer.

Edited, May 7th 2007 9:06am by bodhisattva
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#19 May 07 2007 at 6:15 AM Rating: Excellent
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I like the graphic. I agree it shouldn't be right there with the logo, especially since the colors kinda clash with it.

Put the graphic on the back, put the logo, smaller than shown here, on the front. Upper left is good.
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#20 May 07 2007 at 6:25 AM Rating: Decent
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Samira wrote:
I like the graphic. I agree it shouldn't be right there with the logo, especially since the colors kinda clash with it.

Put the graphic on the back, put the logo, smaller than shown here, on the front. Upper left is good.


Yes, and I'll take four: 2 small, 1 - X large, and one 2X.
#21 May 07 2007 at 8:03 AM Rating: Decent
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Put a comma after "here" and enlarge that text and I'd consider it. The pic probably needs to be smaller too.
#22 May 07 2007 at 8:18 AM Rating: Decent
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Meh.

Should be, in here, everyone can see you scream.

And drop the Forum=4. Should just be =4.
#23 May 07 2007 at 8:49 AM Rating: Excellent
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Bonus points if we can get custom made jerseys or baseball shirts with our poster name and karma score on the back. It could be the official apparel of Allanois '07!
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#24 May 07 2007 at 9:10 AM Rating: Excellent
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Something like this: Front and Back.
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#25 May 07 2007 at 10:52 AM Rating: Excellent
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Mr Winky thinks any choice should include a polo version with his face as the buttons.

I'm trying to talk him out of it.
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#26 May 07 2007 at 11:09 AM Rating: Decent
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Elderon wrote:
The logo should be embroidered on the right chest area, and the rest should go on the back. That would make this a good design.


/nod

maybe also take off the forum=4 and just put =4 on one or both of the sleeves. Make it white text not that greenish color.
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