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#1 May 19 2006 at 1:36 PM Rating: Default
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The deafening sound
The distant thunder
A shell of my former self
My soul is lost
Forgotten and gray
I am lost
A wandering sprite
The nearing thunder roars
The cracking lighting
Lights the sky
My body aches
Blood drips from every wound
Slowly I weaken
The thunder is on top of me
It clinches my throat
It tears me apart
It cresses me and laughs
Now I lay in my grave
No one to mourn me
No one comes
No one cares
I’m Forgotten
I am Dead


Edited, Fri May 19 14:42:24 2006 by ChrisMast
#2 May 19 2006 at 1:38 PM Rating: Good
You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake.


Now, a question of etiquette; as I pass, do I give you the *** or the crotch?
#3 May 19 2006 at 1:38 PM Rating: Excellent
Ministry of Silly Cnuts
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Angsty teen
Doggerel Verse
Sounds like torture
maybe worse

Take advice
and listen to me
Take this sh[Aqua][/Aqua]ite
to OOT
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#4 May 19 2006 at 1:39 PM Rating: Good
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I got as far as 'deafing' and quit.

Like I am going to read a poem by a guy that cant even spell 'deafening'.

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#5 May 19 2006 at 1:40 PM Rating: Good
YAY! Canaduhian
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Smiley: laugh

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#6 May 19 2006 at 1:40 PM Rating: Decent
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Being bored is not a justification for creating a heap of ghey.



#7 May 19 2006 at 1:41 PM Rating: Excellent
Nexa
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Nobby wrote:
Angsty teen
Doggerel Verse
Sounds like torture
maybe worse

Take advice
and listen to me
Take this sh[Aqua][/Aqua]ite
to OOT


You are my favorite...not so much for the poem, but for breaking the swear filter using Aqua.

Nexa
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#8 May 19 2006 at 1:43 PM Rating: Decent
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ChrisMast wrote:
The deafening sound
The distant thunder
A shell of my former self
My soul is lost
Forgotten and gray
I am lost
A wandering sprite
The nearing thunder roars
The cracking lighting
Lights the sky
My body aches
Blood drips from every wound
Slowly I weaken
The thunder is on top of me
It clinches my throat
It tears me apart
It cresses me and laughs
Now I lay in my grave
No one to mourn me
No one comes
No one cares
I’m Forgotten
I am Dead


Edited, Fri May 19 14:42:24 2006 by ChrisMast


/b[/red]itchslap
#9 May 19 2006 at 1:43 PM Rating: Decent
ChrisMast wrote:
blah blah blah
I am Dead


Smiley: yippee
#10 May 19 2006 at 1:44 PM Rating: Good
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Nexa wrote:

You are my favorite...not so much for the poem, but for breaking the swear filter using Aqua.
Aww. GFY
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#11 May 19 2006 at 1:44 PM Rating: Excellent
Liberal Conspiracy
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TILT
There was a poster, ChrisMast
Whose poems held everyone aghast
Though their contents were dark, they made people remark
This writing is utterly ***!
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Belkira wrote:
Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
#12 May 19 2006 at 1:45 PM Rating: Default
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Hey I never said I was a writer and I think my OP proves it.
#13 May 19 2006 at 1:46 PM Rating: Default
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Vote Jophiel for Avatar of the month!

(Smiley: lol)
#14 May 19 2006 at 1:48 PM Rating: Good
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Nobby wrote:
Angsty teen
Doggerel Verse
Sounds like torture
maybe worse

Take advice
and listen to me
Take this sh[Aqua][/Aqua]ite
to OOT


Smiley: laughSmiley: lolSmiley: laugh
Smiley: lolSmiley: laughSmiley: lol
Smiley: laughSmiley: lolSmiley: laugh
#15 May 19 2006 at 1:49 PM Rating: Excellent
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Warchief Jordster wrote:
Vote Jophiel for Avatar of the month!
That's an old one. Folks are probably tired of it by now.

I took my last one down because I didn't think having pictures of myself flashing on my screen at work was such a hot idea Smiley: laugh
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Belkira wrote:
Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
#16 May 19 2006 at 1:49 PM Rating: Excellent
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The OP was bad to a fault,
It's writer fell under assault,
They acted the clown, and rated him down,
Until he was sub-default!
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Jophiel wrote:
I managed to be both retarded and entertaining.

#17 May 19 2006 at 1:51 PM Rating: Good
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Try as he might,
Crap did he write,
Failed at life,
Rated down cause he bites.
#18 May 19 2006 at 1:56 PM Rating: Good
My Canadian haiku
Is better than anything you can write
Even though they're not haikus.
#19 May 19 2006 at 1:59 PM Rating: Good
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Elderon the Wise wrote:
My Canadian haiku
Is better than anything you can write
Even though they're not haikus.


It's actually haiku once you convert the syllables into American.
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#20 May 19 2006 at 2:25 PM Rating: Decent
I like
chicken
No the
noodly
kind.

Look mah, I'm a poet!
#21 May 19 2006 at 2:28 PM Rating: Decent
Queen bodhisattva wrote:
Elderon the Wise wrote:
My Canadian haiku
Is better than anything you can write
Even though they're not haikus.


It's actually haiku once you convert the syllables into American.


Smiley: lol
#22 May 19 2006 at 2:37 PM Rating: Decent
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Jophiel wrote:
Warchief Jordster wrote:
Vote Jophiel for Avatar of the month!
That's an old one. Folks are probably tired of it by now.

I took my last one down because I didn't think having pictures of myself flashing on my screen at work was such a hot idea Smiley: laugh


Elderon's avator loses for (1) using a terribly cliche Shakespeare line and (2) graphically potraying his protest against Allakhazam when (i) he remains a premium member, (ii) the whole protest thing is old and (iii) the graphics look choppy and jagged.




Edited, Fri May 19 16:01:53 2006 by Jordster

Edited, Fri May 19 16:12:45 2006 by Jordster
#23 May 19 2006 at 2:39 PM Rating: Good
Quote:
All Jordser's posts lose.
Fixed for accuracy.
#24 May 19 2006 at 2:40 PM Rating: Decent
Warchief Jordster wrote:
Elderon's avator loses for (1) using a terribly chiche Shakespeare like and (2) graphically potraying his protest against Allakhazam when (i) he remains a premium member, (ii) the whole protest thing is old and (iii) the graphics look choppy and jagged.


You win 1 Jackass Point for your obsession with avatars!
#25 May 19 2006 at 2:40 PM Rating: Decent
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Elderon the Wise wrote:
Quote:
All Jordser's posts lose.
Fixed for accuracy.


(1) You lack wit
(2) That wasn't retort

Thanks for playing.
#26 May 19 2006 at 2:41 PM Rating: Decent
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Professor CrescentFresh wrote:
Warchief Jordster wrote:
Elderon's avator loses for (1) using a terribly chiche Shakespeare like and (2) graphically potraying his protest against Allakhazam when (i) he remains a premium member, (ii) the whole protest thing is old and (iii) the graphics look choppy and jagged.


You win 1 Jackass Point for your obsession with avatars!


The thread is about boredom. I'm bored. Could anything be less unboring than 120x120 avatars???
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