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I'm looking to get a few comments or suggestions on our Deathstalker video synopsis. Do you like the format and would you like these on your portable media player? In epic fashion, it tells the story of reluctant hero Owen Deathstalker who becomes known as the Savior Of Humanity. Thanks for any feedback.

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Well, I consider myself pretty much oone of the semi-ultimate simon R green fans out there, and the deathstalker series is one of my favorites, so i really wanted to like this. I think the format works, the thing that didn't work for me was the artwork. It just didn't fit with my vision of how things should look. No offense, as it looks like someone put a huge amount of time into that, and they can obviously draw better than I can, but the art just doesn't work for me.