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#1 Jun 13 2004 at 4:27 PM Rating: Good
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Well, I attempted a character drawing of Kaolian, and for once it didn't turn out entirely sucky.

http://home.houston.rr.com/acep38/images/kao.jpg

It's loosly based off me IRL, sort of. anyways, if anyone was curious, there it is. If any of you are artisty types, any pointers for next time would be appriciated.

edit: i'm working on a better background, i just ran out of energy.

Edited, Sun Jun 13 17:28:07 2004 by Kaolian

Edited, Mon Jun 14 20:56:03 2004 by Allakhazam
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#2 Jun 13 2004 at 4:42 PM Rating: Good
Smiley: laugh

You crack me up Kao.
#3 Jun 13 2004 at 4:43 PM Rating: Decent
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Maybe a bigger package? And the skin is a bit unhealthy. Unless your many hours in front of a computer make it so....

#4 Jun 13 2004 at 4:44 PM Rating: Good
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laughter... Not the response I was anticipating, but I can work with that!
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#5 Jun 13 2004 at 4:50 PM Rating: Decent
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Okay, serious critique then. The foreshortening on the left (his right) hand is off. The pinky needs to be shorter, and the angle of the wrist is wrong. Try moving it up a bit higher. The right (his left) arm should superimpose the chest, but the left one (his right) should not. Move that bicep behind his pec. You should alternate the positions of the arrows in the quivers so that they don't all line up. Also, he's a little bottom-heavy. Take a look at the ratio of hip-to-waist, maybe even the shoulders.
#6 Jun 13 2004 at 5:00 PM Rating: Good
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I seem to have difficulties drawing hands. The one holding the dagger was actually on backwards for a while. I'll work on those and see if I can make it look better. it's the first thing I've ever drawn that was even remotly huminoid looking when I was done though. Yay!
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#7 Jun 13 2004 at 5:03 PM Rating: Default
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http://home.houston.rr.com/acep38/images/untitled.JPG


Any reason for the 15 pix of the fat kids face morphed on to various people?

I'm fairly sure this one breaks some kidde **** laws!!

http://home.houston.rr.com/acep38/images/untitled20.JPG
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Smasharoo wrote:


Any reason for the 15 pix of the fat kids face morphed on to various people?



it was to make a ppoint in this thread. ust never got around to deleteing it https://everquest.allakhazam.com/forum.html?forum=4&mid=10807703608736534
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#10 Jun 13 2004 at 5:21 PM Rating: Decent
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Kao, that was the funniest thing I've ever seen. Please superimpose that kid's face onto more things, pretty please.
#11 Jun 13 2004 at 5:24 PM Rating: Good
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Does he put out forest fires with that hose?

Seriously, the shirt looks like it's spray-painted on his skin. Give it folds to make it look more natural. He also has proportion issues as Flea pointed out. You can pick up even a cheap "How To Draw" book for tips on how to draw the human body. Don't feel bad, it took people like DaVinci years to come up with the body length formulas and you can learn it now in under ten minutes.

It's better than half the stuff on Elfwood, if that makes you feel better Smiley: wink
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#12 Jun 13 2004 at 5:25 PM Rating: Good
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Those weren't mine, got it in an e-mail a while back from someone else, the images were imbedded in the e-mail so in order to post them here I hosted them in my little web host folder there.
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#13 Jun 13 2004 at 5:37 PM Rating: Decent
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It's better than half the stuff on Elfwood, if that makes you feel better


Elfwood? Is that like a porno mag for dorks that wish they were Legolas?
#14 Jun 13 2004 at 5:39 PM Rating: Decent
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Hosting site for amature fantasy artwork. A strange mixture of fairly professional looking stuff and crudely done line drawings on notebook paper.
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Wow. Regular ol' Joph fan club in here.
#15 Jun 13 2004 at 5:43 PM Rating: Decent
So, you're saying it's a website for dorks that wish they were Legolas.

Gotcha.
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No, website for dorks who wish they could draw Legolas.
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#17 Jun 13 2004 at 7:11 PM Rating: Default
I guess I'll add a suggestion. Some of the shadows are in the right place but it lacks value. Now Value is the intesity of a shadow which gives it a 3D look. Black -> Medium black -> Grey -> Pale grey -> White. Check out this sketch it's not mine but it's a good example. http://drawsketch.about.com/library/graphics/old_boots_tone.jpg

If you mix any of these with another colour it'll give the hue a tint. Bright red -> Deep Red. But with photoshop thankfully! There is the Burn and Dodge tool which makes shadows on three levels. "Shadow", "Mid tone" and "Highlight" Here's what the burn/dodge tool did for me. Now, it doesn't take one shot to get the same results! It takes constant practice! Never give up! ^^;; I have tips for line art and inking aswell but if you wanna know jsut ask!

EDIT: Also! When making shadows, make it spread out more. Right now the shades look like little slivers. To study more about light and shadow look around at still like objects. Turn on a lamp put an object under it. Me, Personally..I don't like reading "How-to books." It has good examples but it won't guarentee you 100% success. I observe closely and try to correct any mistake I make before even finishing. But if How-to books float your boat ~ go for it. Everyone has a diffrent way on approching these things! But always keep an open mind cuz' something better or just as good may come along! ^o^ Kay! I'm done my little prep talk! lol

Edited, Sun Jun 13 20:27:31 2004 by Cloverbell
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I'm not a big fan of How To style books either, but it's a quick and handy way of getting ratios down. Eyes half way down the head, legs being as long as the upper body, etc. Just basic stuff that alone can help some of the "his arm doesn't quite look right" style errors.
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#19 Jun 14 2004 at 8:04 AM Rating: Default
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Arbitrarily editing my posts, now?

******* weakling.

edit: ooohhhh trying to bypass the swear filter, naughty naughty! tsk tsk.

Edited, Mon Jun 14 12:21:34 2004 by Kaolian
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Censorship is IN!!
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#21 Jun 14 2004 at 8:55 AM Rating: Default
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Yeah, apparently.

8400 posts, not one ever edited by an admin, untill now. The main reason that I even post on this board is that complete lack of ego on the part of the admins. In the past they've taken action against people obviously abusing the system, but one would think a non offensive one line quip in the section of the forum listed as "No holds barred" wouldn't be worthy of editing.

Oh well. If you give a five year old a gun I guess you can't be too surprised when he shoots people.
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To make a long story short, I don't take any responsibility for anything I post here. It's not news, it's not truth, it's not serious. It's parody. It's satire. It's bitter. It's angsty. Your mother's a *****. You like to jack off dogs. That's right, you heard me. You like to grab that dog by the bone and rub it like a ski pole. Your dad? Gay. Your priest? Straight. **** off and let me post. It's not true, it's all in good fun. Now go away.

#22 Jun 14 2004 at 11:29 AM Rating: Good
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I took offense at your referring to me as a pedophile. Don't do that, I won't edit. Your choice.

Oh, that second one there was just to tweak your nose. have a nice day!
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#23 Jun 14 2004 at 11:49 AM Rating: Good
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Grow up, Kao. If you can't handle the Asylum, stay in OoT. Boohoo.. someone said something you took offense to. I doubt you'll do that, I call you an edit **** so you have something else to edit and powertrip on.

Edit ****!
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#24 Jun 14 2004 at 12:11 PM Rating: Decent
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So who can we call a pedophile? Let's find out:

Smash is a pedophile.
Jophiel is a pedophile.
Katie is a pedophile.
psychojester is a pedophile.

/em waits
#25 Jun 14 2004 at 12:17 PM Rating: Good
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