Heheh.
Written like a pro!
Insects droned in the heavy, still air, while small expanding ripples appeared where the fish came to the surface to feed. Twisted's line slowly gained tension as the bobber floated lazily downstream in the relaxing current. His eyes closed in contentment as he enjoyed the quiet moment, knowing from previous experience that this, his favorite fishing locale, would soon produce an exciting afternoon of nibbles, strikes, and reels singing as the monofilament races out from the spool as the drag plays the fish.
That thought quickens his pulse, even as the tip of his rod twitches in a sympathetic ballet to the bobber dipping below the surface. He know that his prey, Carpus Empyrus Gigantis swims these waters searching for food. It won't be long now.
The large fish sniffs the bait suspiciously, swims away as if to ignore the delicacy placed on the tiny hook, and rolls his eye back keeping the worm in sight. In a flash he returns, flicks his tail, opens his mouth, and swallows the writhing earthworm!
Up on the riverbank, Twisted sees the end of his fishing rod lunge downward as the mighty carp sets the hook. The game is on!"
Totem