Just a couple of things....
Since moderating the hunters forums for my guild, I found that large posts like this were TL;DR. Posts to EJ were equally irrelevant. The thing that worked were posting specs in their own thread, so people could find it quick and easy. Maybe link to those threads here to keep this as a instructional thread.
Another thing my guild has found as almost essential in any build is entrapment, having that extra time to DPS the add heavy encounters (Magmaw, Omintron, Halfrus, Cho'Gall) and being able to have 2 zones where it is active (ice and snake) has really helped on those.