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#1 Apr 27 2008 at 7:09 PM Rating: Default
I want to hear the story of your paladins but want it in the form of Poetry.No more then 2 paragraphs about 10 lines a piece.

Paladin Sulvain steps out of the light...to uphold the code with decency and might.Growing up in a land full of hate and dispair,reaching out for the weak so vibrant and fair.Following his path set forth by the gods bringing change upon this world to defy all odds.Partnering with his brother who's story we've all heard....Souliken the brave as so many reffered.Battle after battle foes fall one by one....as they venture out on wings kissed by the sun.Hearing of one who's heart tainted black who kills without warning with no fear intact.He attacks at night like thunderous rain, he feels no remorse nor any pain.City after city fell by his reighn, Vaxon the warlock being his name.Hearing of one of this Paladin Sulvain, wanting to kill the Paladin and his name.

Amongst the cliffs of eversong woods Vaxon the warlock's palace stood.Blessings of light Sulvain did feel the strength of 100 along with his courage and will.Facing the demon who's name etched in stone......Souliken the brave fell as Sulvain Stood alone.Holding in his tears of anger and loss harnessing is powers for the cause.With a cry that shook the heavens with a swing of his sword....Vaxon the warlock was no more.Carrying on with the power of light...to uphold the code to defend the night!

Not my best but maybe you'll like it.My story i'm writing will be much better.
#2 Apr 28 2008 at 1:17 AM Rating: Good
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please, PLEASE use enter!

it hurts my eyes to read this.

and also note, ... is not something which belongs in poetry.
#3 Apr 28 2008 at 10:20 AM Rating: Good
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I am dwarven paladin, short and stout.
Here is my hammer, Here is my mount.
When i see the horde i scream and shout
Pop my bubble and hearth right out.

Edited, Apr 28th 2008 2:21pm by Thesleepyrogue
#4 Apr 28 2008 at 11:17 AM Rating: Good
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Strange freestyle to use in a paragraph format.. Usually that's reserved to Iambic Pentametre and the such.. Very noble story though.

This is more of a song that hit me when news of the 2.4 update that stopped our shields from bouncing onto CCed targets and people were wining about what they would use to INTENTIONALLY break CC that they don't want.

(Sung to "If I Only Had a Heart" -- Tin Man, Wizard of Oz)

Consecration, Consecration
The answer's Consecration
The best sheep breaker in the world

And all those stupid Rogues
Will be put off when you show
That sap's for little girls

Consecration, Consecration
The answer's Consecration
The best sheep breaker in the world

And all those crazy Mages
Will flip you off and ask
"How'd these guys become Sages?"
When you show them sheep's for little girls

Edited, Apr 28th 2008 2:18pm by Losie
#5 Apr 28 2008 at 11:55 AM Rating: Decent
i couldnt read anything in the OP. for some reason im getting this mental brain freeze thing happening everytime i get to a period and dont see any spaces after them. took me 10 minutes to read 3 sentences then i just gave up.

Edited, Apr 28th 2008 12:55pm by RuenBahamut
#6 Apr 28 2008 at 12:35 PM Rating: Good
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As a young pally
I was brash and bold
killing wolf pups
and nasty little gnolls.

I killed for cash
and a little green bling
never gave a thought
to ever healing.

Then I hit 70
and thought... hmm, I'll try it
I went back to prot so fast,
faster than Oprah breaks a diet.
#7 Apr 29 2008 at 8:06 PM Rating: Decent
I appolagise that my gramar was not up to par.Just something I threw together at the last minute.I never rough drafted it.Great poems though.Never meant to hurt anyones eyes.:(
#8 Apr 29 2008 at 9:20 PM Rating: Decent
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At least one space after a period. Otherwise your sentences just jumble together into one big pile of words.

#9 Apr 30 2008 at 5:13 AM Rating: Good
I used to have a Naaru
We used to be best friends
That was until recently
When our friendship reached it's end

I called my Naaru "M'uru"
He was such a sight to see
And my little Naaru
Gave such pretty gifts to me

"The Light" he called his gifts
Because they made me bright with joy
But one day I found out
I had broke my little toy.

Now M'uru cannot give me Light
And I'm stuck with the Draenai
Getting all my awesome power
From some sissy "A'dal" guy.

But Alliance find their power there
Let those cowards praise themselves hoarse.
A Blood Knight knows a thing or two
Like power is gained through force.


#10 May 01 2008 at 8:45 AM Rating: Decent
There once was a noble Paladin
Who's bravery was known
His heroism and strength
His courage was his own.

Many foes had fallen
To his mighty hand
As he rode his trusty steed
Protecting his home land.

Searching for a purpose
Striving to be the best
Evil that haunted this paladin
Fell like all the rest.

Noble as he was
The years were also kind
Sulvain was his name
Kingship he did find!
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