Actually I could read it, but you're using a form of expression not commonly used in Japan (the first line in particular, people are usually a bit less formal than that, and you used the past tense 'te' form so I was a bit confused about that :D). Also, the second line uses the westernisation 'Huo-to', when they usually write 'Shashin' in kana simply because you can't put the subvocal 'f' sound into it if you're writing katakana :). Finally, the word you're looking for is 'hatasu', you have used the hiragana 'hataTSU', which doesnt mean anything.
I just didnt want to look like a smartass :P
And it was taken in a bar in Kuwana called Teppen Noriaki Nagasaka. If you're ever in Aichi, you really should visit the place, its the best bar Ive ever been to in my life.
~sins
Edited, Dec 5th 2007 1:35am by Sinstralis